This is such a cool challenge - It’s perfect for really getting hands on and exploring the publically available Collections in the Postman API Network! 
I often like to browse the network and select Collections from companies that I’ve not heard of before, to get a better understanding about what they offer their customers.
I forked this Collection by Smartcar into my Workspace so that I could see if I could help improve it:
Initially, I can see that the documentation could be improved at the Collection level, it’s what I would see first so I’d like to know more about what the Collection offers me. There is a link out to some external documentation in Notion which is takes me away from the Collection itself, the link happens to be to a page that cannot be accessed so that could be an improvement to suggest to fix that link. That external information could be brought it the Collection documentation and fully make use of the editing features that can really make the documentation come to life!
The overall structure of the Collection and it’s Folders could also be improved, it looks like they have made a start but there are many requests that could also be grouped and renamed.
The requests could benefit from having Examples to display the type of responses that users could expect to see when calling the endpoints. This also has the added benefit of not only auto-populating that data in the documentation but those examples can also be used with a Mock Server during development.
I can see that they have some variables set, with the new Simplified Variable experience, their could add descriptions to give more context about the variable to the consumer of the API.
They have included details at the Request level for some endpoints but these could be placed directly into the request itself and using the Types feature, users would have more of an interactive view about the required params and their datatypes, it removes the guesswork. 
More improvements could be made throughout this particular Collection, I was just using this as a random example.
I’d really love to see the type of improvements that you could all suggest, in any of the 500K+ Collections that are part of the Postman API Network!!
Get your submissions in now and get your name in the hat to win the $250 USD!!
We’re always here if you need any more help or pointers!! Good Luck!! 